Listen, listen to what it wants to say, For you may not have another day. I know we are not best friends, But just give me a second. You and me are quite far away, But do not let this stand in our way. We seldom talk to each other, But does it really matter? Wherever you go, You'll always be a friend I'm glad to know. Albeit we are not very close, Who knows, someday in the future our path might cross. So, please stop for a moment, And listen. Listen carefully to the brightest star at night, That illuminates the sky with luminous light. "You and me," it whispers, "will be FRIENDS FOREVER!"What do you think about my poem? Do write a comment please.
Saturday, November 25, 2006
Listen To The Star
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very nice poem! your english better than mine already lor haha
ReplyDeleteWah....not bad not bad.Your England sudah manyak impruve.My England also not so powderful oredi.
ReplyDeleteAll the medical terms and studying killing and stifling my language of expression.
Ah-Hing kor kor english sux anyway.Dun mind him.How can compare?Hahaha...:p
Good luck in your SPM.Ganbatte!
Friend is wat u got when u got to know each other well
ReplyDeleteFriend is wat they would always seeking u always
Friend is wat they would be beside u when u r feeling down
Friend is wat u do the same to them
Friend is wat u shouldn't forget always
Friend is wat u should precious it always
As there is no warranty and reason in friendship if u dun think like this
Adios Pal,
1stly,yr english very let me feel impressive^^sometimes,if u cant be the star tat near to the*moon*,n the *moon*cant understand u well,dun feel pessimistic,u can always become the*nearest yet most shining(quiet)star accompany bside the*MOON*
ReplyDeleteBUCK UP!!